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23 EP3

In my third edition of this pitch, I didn't change my outfit but I tried to focus more on my product and how it would benefit my customers, as my feedback pointed out was needed. I also tried to keep it concise and to the point. My feedback said I did a good job about getting to the point so I tried to emphasize that and keep a lot of that in this pitch, but I tried to make sure I didn't speak too quickly and seem rushed. I know the assignment said we should feel more comfortable in front of the camera, but that is something I have always had trouble with and will always need to work on.

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  1. StefanNovember 10, 2017 at 11:08 AM

    Hey Megan, your last pitch was not one of the ones that I watched, but from what you said the feedback was, you nailed it. I had a clear idea of your product while watching. I am with you on not feeling comfortable in front of the camera. I had to do 3 or 4 different takes on all of mine because I messed up so much.

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  2. UnknownNovember 12, 2017 at 4:03 PM

    It looks like you really improved from the feedback and I could see a change. You look pretty confident in your idea and I can see you feeling more comfortable. Good job!

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  3. UnknownNovember 12, 2017 at 4:18 PM

    Cute!

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  4. vickycruzmcNovember 12, 2017 at 6:01 PM

    Hey Megan! I think youdont really look uncofortable in front of the camera so good job! You also did talk a little bit slower but still getting to the point. You did seem very confident about that idea and if you are sure its going to work, that gets transmitted to others and helps sell your idea better! Great job!

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  5. joiiooNovember 12, 2017 at 8:27 PM

    Hey Megan,
    You did a really great job on your elevator pitch! I totally feel you on the whole no outfit change thing, life is a struggle. I can see how your elevator pitch has improved. You went into more detail about what your idea entails and how you would make a profit off of it. Overall I think this is a great idea.

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